He stormed out. And the door shivered banging continuously. She barged into her room and dropped on the bed. Hugging the pillow, she wept. Inconsolably.
Rubbing her running nose and wiping her tears, she remembered her mother’s words “You will suffer Priyu for what you are doing....As a boyfriend Abhi will be the sweetest.. you will get to know when he becomes a husband.. things will change, Priyu..You cannot take it alone!”
She had coolly remarked “Abhi is not like Nana, Amma…”
“Priyamavada.. “ her mother screamed, as Priyamvada Rao was packing her clothes to live a blissful life with Abhimanyu Tripathi, her college sweetheart and now, husband.
“mind your tongue. You’ve gone mad … when you begin to live together, you will know the pain..Money is important too.. Love will not buy you things..” her mother advised before Priyamvada left the home to live with Abhi.
She remembered the innumerable advices that poured in when she decided to leave her home and get married to Abhi. One of her school mates had advised “Aiyoo.. Priyu.. why do you want marry North Indian re? They only look fair and nice re.. Even Akka loved my neighbor but luckily Amma had saved her.”
Priyamavada laughed and had brushed all the thoughts, aside then. She knew Abhi too well and all these were mere foolish comparisons.
But, why did she think of it now? She wiped her tears and looked for her phone. She looked around the one BHK flat. Finally, she found her phone, lying near the stove. They had purchased it and most of the essentials mortgaging her gold ornaments.
She had taken it while leaving home for buying the essential items for survival till Abhi and she secure a job.
In haste, she dialed his old number. When the electronic message read. She realized that they had changed their numbers.
She searched for his new number and dialed it. Her heart beat faster and the phone rang.
Tring.. Tring..
It rang.. Abhi took a last puff and finally threw the cigarette. He ignored his phone which rang incessantly. The phone vibrated again. It was a message. It read "I am very sorry.. :(.. Come home.. I miss you.." He messaged "In a while. I love you!"
She replied "I love you a lot.."
He purchased the third cigarette at the Pan Shop and paid 3 rupees to him. The Pan shop owner said in a monotonous tone.. “Four rupees..”
And, he handed it over to him, after searching his pockets thoroughly. He reminisced the Pan shop wala near college where his account was still due, and smiled. His friends and he used to purchase packets and go on long drives.
He consulted his friends when he decided to go against his family's wishes and marry Priyamwada. His friend Prajwal had suggested, “Don’t worry yaar..We are there for you... My uncle works in a company.. and we can manage a job..His term is about to end but we can manage… ”
“you leave your home and another one BHK flat is ready for you.. You earn and you can even pay for your college fees..” Prajwal encouraged
After a lot of contemplation, Abhimanyu decided to move out of his home. He had convinced Priyamwada too. She was skeptical in the beginning but eventually agreed. After all, they felt they were inseparable and nothing could separate them. In the beginning, they tried convincing their respective parents . Their denial and their fury, forced them to take the extreme step of revolting against them.
After a lot of melodrama at Priyamwada’s home, she left the home. Taking her father’s curse and her mother’s advice against the wedding, Priyamwada Rao walked out. Abhimanyu’s family refused to even talk with him.
Abhimanyu and Priyamwada finally moved out to make a life of their own.
But by the time, they had decided to move out, Prajwal’s uncle term had end and the management had changed. They had decided to recruit only candidates with an year or more of experience.
Prajwal’s uncle had tried but failed to help Abhi. When Prajwal broke the news to Abhimanyu, he was shattered.
Prajwal said “No worries yaar.. we will manage..” "But still, it would take time!" Abhi thought
How would they complete their education? How would Priyamwada pursue her ambition? How long would the mortgaged money last? Their friends were still in college too! How long would they help them? And how much would they help?
That evening, the battle of “I told you so..” “We should have listened to our parents..” followed and for the first time, they felt the harsh pinch of reality.
Abhimanyu walked back to his home, kicking the stone that lay on the road. He could not think anything. He went to the flat and found the door still open.
He went in to see Priyamwada still crying. He hugged her tight. She said "Don't worry.. we still have some of the ornaments to be mortgaged.."
"Hmm.." Abhi hushed her.
After hours of incomprehensible silence,
"Hmm.." Abhi hushed her.
After hours of incomprehensible silence,
each of them had a glassful of milk and slept.
The next morning, Abhimanyu was still lying down on his bed. Hoping the day would be better, Just then, he heard Priyamwada scream ..”Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiii… “
He jumped out of his bed.. and ran to her.. she cried “My jewellary is missing..”




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12 comments:
I love it . See my comment elsewhere.
I'm blessed!
You have touched the old Northi-Southi / love-arranged marriage thing.
To keep an avid reader grounded, I believe, twists are required. The last line is the twist here .. Did Abhi steal the jewellery? For what - betting or for something important?
Is it going to intensify the tensions between them?
I like where it is going. :)
By the way, that thing about boyfriend vs husband in the beginning does not really convey much to me. After all, Abhi did get married to his woman and became a husband from a boyfriend. Sounds misplaced to me.
Keep writing.
Thanks Anand! The advice was from a mother. :) And usually mothers say that..there's a difference between a boyfriend and a husband:).
So Abhi had already stolen the jewellery or was there a theft at their house that night..??
Nice story. :)
Keep guessing!
Then Abhi said,
"You silly priya we don't need jewellery to live our life , we need love"
And priya agreed and they lived(loved) happily ever after
:P
lol..:P
can see some grammatical errors ;)..curious to know if its fictional or real :D
please tell me what are they :(
Am trying to see where exactly the bitter half comes in.. much after the ending is it?
Nice story madam. I came here following a comment on another blog.
:) Thank you Vicy Dada (Vikas) !
The Bitter Half.. Er... :D Each of us have our own interpretation! thanks for letting me know yours!
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