Friday, January 20, 2012

Feast of Roses


The Dried Flower

The color had faded
the memory did not
Between those old pages
Found our first flower


First Rose

"Ten rupees" he demand
Pleaded "Make it five?"
He smiled. He realised
Love--my only wealth




Under the Pillow

Placed under the pillow
White rose I picked
The thorn hurt first
Painted the rose, red


Note: These are short writes called Jorios. Four lines and each line contains four words.
It must capture a moment. None of the lines must rhyme.

This is my first attempt.

9 comments:

"THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD" said...

something unique frm ur end :)

Abhishek said...

Wonderful. :) Liked it !! Write some more like this. :) :)

Divenita said...

:) thank u bc..:D

thank u abhishek!

Dee.. said...

wonderful types
Dee..

Divenita said...

thanks Dee!

Joshi Mukard said...

the first one is awesome.

Divenita said...

:) Thank you Joshi Mukard!

Raja said...

Sweet..

Divenita said...

:)Thanks Raja

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