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Click on the dates, to know more: 15 September 2011 16 August, 2011; 26 July, 2011 July 3, 2011; 5 June, 2011; 18 May, 2011 ; 15 May, 2011 ; 20 April, 2011 ; 30 March, 2011; 17 March, 2011 ; 22 February 2011
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Click on the dates, to know more: 15 September 2011 16 August, 2011; 26 July, 2011 July 3, 2011; 5 June, 2011; 18 May, 2011 ; 15 May, 2011 ; 20 April, 2011 ; 30 March, 2011; 17 March, 2011 ; 22 February 2011
; 19 January 2011 ;
To buy Aquillrelle Anthology Part 1 (where our (mine and couple of poet friends)) work got selected and published, click: Yay! Our book
A couple of things I missed: Reliance Time Out contest
Weekly Artiste:http://www.weeklyartist.com/2011/08/nivedita.html
Still hope to win it someday.
One minute writer - Weekly (will sport the badge someday)
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7 comments:
short n good one nivvu... keep up the gud work, ws kinda hopin thr ws more... :)
To forgive is to set a prisoner free and discover that the prisoner was you...
That was a really nice story. Made me travel down my memory lane and get all nostalgic... :)
However, compared to other stories, this one was quite fast paced and thus seemed too good to be true. But I guess it's becoming a trend nowadays...
8/10
long no doubt :D..but u cud've structured it in paragraphs so tat wud've been easy 2 read n follow it ;)
waiting 2 read d next part :)
This was about relationships and marriage so couldn't relate to it, but I did understand it. :)
The fact that you tried to write from a perspective of a guy is commendable. :)
Keep writing. :)
That the story has you hooked till the end is saying a lot about your story-telling ability...which is great!
Nice, captivating beginning. Good ending too. Can take care of the meandering story in between(Eg.The mother's character interrupts with the story line taking it away from its focus.)
:) Thank you for the overwhelming response!
Thanks, BC!
:):)
thank u --- dearest abhishek ... glad u liked it
thank u subha for the feedback:)
Really Liked it! :)
I too agree with the paragraphing part.
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